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Which Came First, the Chicken or the Egg?
Between the idea
And the reality
Between the motion
And the act
Falls the Shadow…
— T.S. Eliot, “The Hollow Men”
“You mean to tell me that you went all the way to the Crimea because
of one sentence written by Susan Sontag?” My friend Ron Rosenbaum
seemed incredulous. I told him, “No, it was actually two sentences.”
The sentences are from Sontag’s “Regarding the Pain of Others,” her last published book.
Here are the two sentences:
Not surprisingly many of the canonical images of early war
photography turn out to have been staged, or to have had their subjects
tampered with. After reaching the much shelled valley approaching
Sebastopol in his horse-drawn darkroom, [Roger] Fenton made two
exposures from the same tripod position: in the first version of the
celebrated photo he was to call “The Valley of the Shadow of
Death”(despite the title, it was not across this landscape, that the
Light Brigade made its doomed charge), the cannonballs are thick on the
ground to the left of the road, but before taking the second picture –
the one that is always reproduced – he oversaw the scattering of the
cannonballs on the road itself.
There are no photographs – only references to photographs – in
Sontag’s book. I will make this a little easier for the reader. Here
are the two Fenton photographs taken “from the same tripod position.” I
gave them the names – “OFF” and “ON” – the-photograph-with-cannonballs-off-the-road and the-photograph-with-cannonballs-on-the-road.
Fenton, Roger. Valley of The Shadow of Death. Harry Ransom Humanities Research Center, The University of Texas at Austin.
Fenton, Roger. Valley of The Shadow of Death. Harry Ransom Humanities Research Center, The University of Texas at Austin.
I spent a considerable amount of time looking at the two photographs
and thinking about the two sentences. Sontag, of course, does not claim
that Fenton altered either photograph after taking them – only that he altered or “staged” the second photograph by altering the landscape
that was photographed. This much seems clear. But how did Sontag know
that Fenton altered the landscape or, for that matter, “oversaw the
scattering of the cannonballs on the road itself?”
Surely, any evidence of this would be independent of the
photographs. We don’t see Fenton (or anyone else for that matter) in
either of the photographs bending down as if to pick up or put down a
cannonball. How does Sontag know what Fenton was doing or why he was
doing it? (To up the ante, Sontag’s sentence also suggests a certain
laziness on Fenton’s part, as if he himself couldn’t be bothered with
picking up or putting down a cannonball himself, but instead supervised
or oversaw their placement. The imperious Fenton: Hey, you, over there. Pick up that cannonball and move it on to the road. No not there. A little more to the left. Or maybe it wasn’t laziness. Maybe he had a bad back. The incapacitated Fenton: Boy, my back is killing me. Would you mind picking up a few cannonballs and carrying them on to the road?)
While I was wrestling with these questions, it occurred to me that there was an even deeper question. How did Sontag know the sequence
of the photographs? How did she know which photograph came first, OFF
or ON? Presumably, there had to be some additional information that
allowed the photographs to be ordered: before and after. If this is the
basis for her claim that the second photograph was staged – that the
landscape was posed for the second photograph – shouldn’t she
offer some evidence? Fenton takes one photograph (OFF), oversees the
scattering of the cannonballs and then takes another photograph (ON).
There are no footnotes in Sontag’s book, but fortunately there is an acknowledgment section at the end:
I owe the information that there were two versions of Fenton’s “The
Valley of the Shadow of Death” to Mark Haworth-Booth of the Victoria
and Albert Museum; both are reproduced in “The Ultimate Spectacle: A
Visual History of the Crimean War,” by Ulrich Keller (Routledge, 2001).
I bought a copy of Ulrich Keller’s book
and turned immediately to the section on the two photographs. Chapter
Four: “The Valley of the Shadow of Death: The Triumph of Photography.”
And found the following passage where Keller lays claim to a number of
historical discoveries – namely that there are two photographs, that
the photographs are slightly different and that the cannonballs in the
second photograph were placed there either by Fenton or under Fenton’s
Here is the text (the emphases in italics are mine):
A slight but significant difference between Fenton’s two pictures of
the site seems to have escaped the attention of photographic
historians. The first variant obviously represents the road
to the trenches in the state in which the photographer found it, with
the cannonballs lining the side of the road. In a second version we
discover a new feature. Some round-shot is now demonstratively
distributed all over the road surface – as if the balls had just been
hurled there, exposing the photographer to a hail of fire. Not content
with the peaceful state of things recorded in the first picture, Fenton
obviously rearranged the evidence in order to create a sense of drama and danger that had originally been absent from the scene.
In turn, this passage references a footnote where Keller further expands on his claims about Fenton’s personality:
“That Fenton tended to exaggerate the dangers of his photographic
campaign, too, can be gathered from ‘The Daily News’ of September 20,
1855, which lists a series of his close calls, such as his operating
van… being frequently an object of suspicion with the Russians; himself
being wounded by a shell; his assistant shot in the hand by a ball from
a Minié rifle.”
Fenton’s assistant, gets his picture taken before heading to the Valley
of the Shadow of Death. Fenton had written, “The picture was due to the
precaution of the driver on that day, who suggested as there were a
possibility of a stop being put in that valley to the further travels
of both vehicle and driver, it would be showing a proper consideration
for both to take a likeness of them before starting.” (Credit: Library
Keller says that the first photograph obviously “represents the road…in which the photographer found it” (OFF) and Fenton obviously “rearranged the evidence,” that is the cannonballs, in the second photograph (ON).
As I’ve said elsewhere: Nothing is so obvious that it’s obvious. When someone says that something is obvious,
it seems almost certain that it is anything but obvious – even to them.
The use of the word “obvious” indicates the absence of a logical
argument – an attempt to convince the reader by asserting the truth of
something by saying it a little louder.
I called Keller in Germany, where he is on leave from the University of California, Santa Barbara.
ERROL MORRIS: I became aware of your book on Fenton by reading Susan
Sontag. She refers to your book in her afterword, and talks about the
two photographs captioned: “The Valley of the Shadow of Death.” She
suggests that Fenton posed one of the photographs.
ULRICH KELLER: Yes.
ERROL MORRIS: She seems to have taken most of that material wholesale from you.
ULRICH KELLER: Yes, I guess one could say that. Yes.
ERROL MORRIS: What interests me is this idea that one of the photographs was posed. Of one of the photographs being a fake.
ULRICH KELLER: It has been sort of retouched or interfered with to
get some drama into it that wasn’t originally in it. I wouldn’t go so
far as to say it’s a fake, but it’s deceptive. Certainly.
ERROL MORRIS: Deceptive in what way?
ULRICH KELLER: Well, deceptive in that it creates the impression
that the picture was taken under great danger when that was not the
ERROL MORRIS: Both pictures?
ULRICH KELLER: The second one. It’s clear that the one with cannonballs on the surface of the road must be later, obviously.
ERROL MORRIS: Why?
ULRICH KELLER: Well, because of two pictures, one has the
cannonballs resting in the ditch there to the side (OFF) and the other
one has them on the surface of the road (ON). It’s much, much more
likely to assume that Fenton would have taken these balls out of the
ditch and onto the road rather than the other way round. What
motivation would he have had to take cannonballs that were on the road
and remove them? Why would he do that? So I think it’s pretty obvious.
But you have doubts about that?
ERROL MORRIS: Yes. I have wondered how you came to the conclusion
that the one with the cannonballs on the road (ON) has to be the second
photograph. You suggest that Fenton was not in danger but wanted to
ratchet up the drama of the scene by making it look as though he were
under attack. That Fenton wanted to convey a false impression of
derring-do to the prospective viewer of the photograph. But why do you
believe that? I may not be phrasing this very well. If not, my apology.
ULRICH KELLER: Well, I can see a motivation for him to take the
balls out of the ditch and put them in the middle of the road. That
makes sense to me. It’s something that I think is plausible for someone
to do. The other way around, I don’t know why anyone would do that. I
don’t think it’s likely.
ERROL MORRIS: Is it the absence of a psychological explanation that makes “the other way around” unlikely or implausible?
ULRICH KELLER: Yes.
* * *
But is it so psychologically implausible for Fenton to have removed
the balls from the road? Ann Petrone, who works in my office, says, “Of
course he took the balls off the road. Don’t they need to use the
road?” She calls it the commonsense solution. But there could be
artistic reasons, as well. Fenton could have liked the aesthetic
quality that the barren road would have given him. He could have put
the balls on the road for the first picture (ON) and then taken them
off the road for the second (OFF), because he preferred the simplicity
of OFF. Maybe he saw the balls on the road and felt they looked fake,
and removed them in the interest of creating a more honest picture.
In Keller’s book, there is a letter from Fenton to his wife dated
April 24, 1855. Fenton’s entire correspondence from the Crimea, 25
letters, is available on line. This is an excerpt from letter No. 10:
…Yesterday after finishing the last picture of the Panorama I got
Sir John to lend me a couple of mules to take my caravan down to a
ravine known by the name of the valley of the shadow of Death from the
quantity of Russian balls which have fallen in it… We were detained in
setting off & so got down just about 3PM yesterday. I took the van
down nearly as far as I intended it to go & then went forward to
find out the chosen spot. I had scarcely started when a dash up of dust
behind the battery before us showed something was on the road to us, we
could not see it but another flirt of earth nearer showed that it was
coming straight & in a moment we saw it bounding up towards us. It
turned off when near & where it went I did not see as a shell came
over about the same spot, knocked it [sic] fuse out & joined the
mass of its brethren without bursting. It was plain that the line of
fire was upon the very spot I had chosen, so very reluctantly I put up
with another reach of the valley about 100 yds short of the best point.
I brought the van down & fixed the camera & while leveling it
another ball came in a more slanting direction touching the rear of the
battery as the others but instead of coming up the road bounded on to
the hill on our left about 50 yards from us & came down right to us
stopping at our feet. I picked it up put it into the van & hope to
make you a present of it. After this no more came near though plenty
passed up on each side. We were there an hour & a half an [sic] got
2 good pictures returning back in triumph with our trophies finishing
the days work but taking the van to the mortar battery on the top of
the hill in front of the light division…
Here are the facts as expressed in the letter:
1) The photographs were taken on April 23, 1855 — the day before the letter was written.
2) Fenton took the photographs in the Valley of the Shadow of Death,
so named because of “the quantity of Russian cannonballs that had
3) The two photographs were taken between 3 p.m. and 5 p.m.. They
arrived “about 3 p.m.” and stayed “about an hour & a half.”
4) Fenton and his assistant set up in a hazardous location and then
retreated 100 yards up the road. Even though the location was no longer
directly in the line of fire, they were still at considerable risk.
5) Fenton took one of the cannonballs as a trophy to present to his wife.
The letter is a godsend. It provides an extraordinary amount of
useful information. Without it, we would probably not be able to
determine when and where the photographs were taken. But the letter
makes no reference to the order of the photographs nor to whether the
cannonballs were put on or taken off the road. There is no mention made
of the two photographs save for the information that Fenton “got two
good pictures returning back in triumph with our trophies…”
I read further in Keller but found no reference to Fenton overseeing
the scattering of the cannonballs. It’s not in Fenton’s letters, so
where did this idea come from? I started to wonder. Which came first: a
conjecture about the order of the photographs based on Fenton’s (real
or imagined) intentions or a specific piece of historical information,
for example, something that Fenton had written that revealed the order
of he photographs? (If Fenton had written to his wife, for example,
that he had overseen the scattering of the balls, the question would be
laid to rest. At least we would know that Fenton had claimed to have done that. Regardless of whether he did do it.)
This led to me to a more general question: Would it be possible to
order these photographs not based on anything that Fenton said (which
might be unreliable) – but based on evidence in the photographs
themselves? This idea appealed to me because it did not require me to
imagine something about Fenton’s intentions, that is, about his
internal mental state. After all, how can I know what the guy sitting
next to me in Starbucks is thinking, let alone a man who lived 150
My next interview was with Mark Haworth-Booth, the former curator of
photography at the Victoria & Albert in London. Haworth-Booth, of
course, was Sontag’s primary source. He was the one who referred her to
Ulrich Keller’s monograph on Fenton, and I was of course interested in
the details of how this all happened.
HAWORTH-BOOTH: Mark Holborn, Sontag’s editor in London called me and
told me that Sontag was looking for some material about Fenton, and I
sent him some photocopies of a thing I’d written a long time ago. He
passed them on to her, and she was very grateful. She didn’t really
quote them very accurately. She overstated what I said, which is very
characteristic of her writing. It became much more black-and-white and
strident than it was when I said it. I was raising doubts, but she
assumed that my doubts were a matter of fact rather than speculation.
Anyway, I was very grateful for the nice acknowledgment.
ERROL MORRIS: Can I see the article you sent her?
HAWORTH-BOOTH: Well, it doesn’t really amount to very much. It’s just a paragraph or so in a book I did called “Old and Modern Masters of Photography,”
and it has a short introduction in which this speculation about “Valley
of the Shadow of Death” appears. It came out about 1981.
ERROL MORRIS: And the nature of the speculation?
HAWORTH-BOOTH: Well, I noticed that there are two versions of the
“Valley of the Shadow of Death” about 25 years ago, and it made me
think: one of the pictures is clearly much more interesting and
expressive than the other. So I began to wonder if Fenton and his
assistant helped the composition by moving the cannonballs themselves.
That’s what I raised as a speculation.
ERROL MORRIS: Hold on just one second. My aging dog wants to get up
on a chair. Well, the issue of the two Fenton photographs, were you the
first to notice that?
HAWORTH-BOOTH: As far as I’m aware. Other people have claimed it,
but they claimed it many years after me. The main person I’m aware of
who thinks he was the first, the man who did the book on all the
different representations of the Crimean War. I think his name is
ERROL MORRIS: Yes. I’ve spoken to him. I’m familiar with the book.
HAWORTH-BOOTH: Good. His book is terrific. Anyway, he thought he had
invented the idea. But I had published it in 1981, so I’m kind of a
long way in the lead of him. I mean, it’s certainly pretty obvious, but
no one that I’m aware of had noticed it before. I just happened to have
two books open on my desk at the same time when I was having lunch, and
I noticed this difference.
* * *
Even though Haworth-Booth and Keller disagree about who first
discovered the twin photographs, they do agree that OFF was first and
ON second. They also agree that Fenton, in all likelihood, posed the
second photograph. However, as Haworth-Booth suggested in my interview
with him, this is not a view shared by all museum curators of
photography. Gordon Baldwin, recently retired as a curator at the Getty
in Los Angeles, has his own views of the order of the two photographs.
I called him.
ERROL MORRIS: I’m interested in two photographs – the two versions of Fenton’s “The Valley of the Shadow of Death”.
GORDON BALDWIN: O.K., excellent. As you perhaps have heard I have strong opinions on the subject.
ERROL MORRIS: Ah. I am more than interested.
GORDON BALDWIN: Well, I’ve written an essay – not a very long one –
the Folio Society is publishing a book in a few months called “The
Hundred Greatest Photographs.” I wrote three essays for the book and
that’s one of them. I think there’s a clear explanation for what
happened – why there are two photographs, and why they’re different.
And I think earlier readings in which people have thought that Fenton
was moving cannonballs around are erroneous. I don’t think he moved
cannonballs around. The cannonballs were harvested, so to
speak, by soldiers who were there. The place that Fenton went to make
the photograph – there are accounts in the London Illustrated News
about that place and in that account that appeared they talk about the
fact that the soldiers harvested the cannonballs in order to fire them
ERROL MORRIS: Recycled them?
GORDON BALDWIN: Yeah, recycling. Heavy duty recycling. I think
that’s what happened. I don’t know, have you had a chance to look at
Fenton’s correspondence on the subject of “The Valley of the Shadow of
Death”? There are two different letters that he wrote which deal with
that place and what happened there. In the first one he talked about
going to reconnoiter the site – and this is without a camera – and
talks about cannonballs so thick on the ground it was difficult to walk
without treading on them. Which indicates to me a lot of cannonballs.
And then in the second letter where he describes making the
photographs, he talks about being under fire. At the time cannonballs
are bouncing around. I don’t think that someone who was under fire
would have had the time or inclination to be moving cannonballs around,
but soldiers might well have done so. There’s a correspondent for the
London Times who describes horses swaybacked from the weight of the
cannonballs that they were carrying. Russell, the Times correspondent
describes it, and this is part of that recycling process. I think
that’s what happened. So what people commonly have thought is the first photograph with few cannonballs (OFF) is the second photograph after some of them have been removed.
ERROL MORRIS: What attracted my attention to all of this is a couple of paragraphs in Susan Sontag’s last book.
GORDON BALDWIN: Oh, dear. Yes, O.K. I don’t think she’s very good on Fenton, frankly, but go ahead.
ERROL MORRIS: She mentions how one of the Fenton photographs was posed or staged. That we’re always disappointed
when we learn that a photograph has been posed. Then she goes on to
talk about the difference between fake paintings and fake photographs.
Namely, a fake painting is a painting with faulty provenance— say, a
painting that is purportedly by Vermeer, but turns out to be painted by
somebody else. But according to Sontag, a fake photograph is a
photograph that’s been posed. A perfect illustration of what she’s
talking about would be the purportedly posed photograph by Fenton, what
she takes to be the second photograph [ON] in the Valley of the Shadow
GORDON BALDWIN: There are photographs of which this is quite true,
particularly photographs made by Alexander Gardiner during the American
Civil War, but I don’t think that is what Fenton did. It’s a somewhat
debunking way of looking at Fenton’s work. Vicki Goldberg would be
someone who would subscribe to this point of view, as well, but I don’t
think that’s what happened. Fenton’s own work tells us that that isn’t
what happened. I don’t think it was like him to have manipulated – to
have falsified an image in that way – and one reason I’d say so is: he
was simply photographing the place as he found it. I don’t think he had
an idea about the symbolic – what later people would say was the
symbolic value of the photograph. In other words, most of his
photographs from the Crimea are documentation of places where battles
have occurred. I don’t think he meant to make a highly charged
photograph. The place was quite well known. He didn’t name it “The
Valley of the Shadow of Death,” the soldiers had, and it was named that
simply because it was a dangerous place. The ravine was a place where
the Russians feared a surreptitious attack would be launched on a
position of theirs and to forestall that, they shelled it periodically
regardless of whether there were people there. And so it got this
nickname. When Fenton went there, he was going to a place he knew
about, but I don’t think he intended to so weight the image as
subsequent critics have. As a metaphor for devastation it’s a wonderful
photograph, but I’m not sure that was really his intention in making
it. That makes some sense I hope?
ERROL MORRIS: Yes, of course it does. But it is still unusual that
he took two photographs. I don’t know of any other example – correct me
if I’m wrong – where he took a pair of photographs from the same camera
GORDON BALDWIN: No, I don’t think there is one. I think you’re quite
right. Certainly when he makes panoramas in the Crimea, the camera is
in one place and it’s rotated to a degree.
[Baldwin is referring to the overlapping photographs that Fenton
took from the British encampments. Just as Fenton had made an
experiment with time by taking two still pictures from the same camera
position, he experimented with space by creating some of the first
ERROL MORRIS: Yeah, he’s panning.
GORDON BALDWIN: Yeah, although he’s not terribly skillful at it, to
tell the truth. The edges don’t quite line up the way they might. But
those are quite different from the photographs in the Valley of the
Shadow of Death. He’s there for an hour and a half and comes back with
two photographs. His van is drawn by army mules, not by horses in this
instant, and with the army mules came a soldier or two. Sparling, his
assistant was there. He was always there. I’ve pulled out the page from
the Folio Society book. What Fenton wrote to his wife in this first
one, this is a couple of weeks before he made the photographs. “Farther
on the balls lay thicker but in coming to a ravine called the valley of
death the site passed all imagination. Ground shot and shell lay like a
stream at the bottom of the hollow all the way down. You could not walk
without treading upon them…” That was written on the 4th of April. On
the 23rd of April, when he’s writing again, he writes saying – because
he’s been forced to retreat from the camera position he wanted to use,
because of being fired at. He writes, “very reluctantly I’ve put up
with another reach of the valley, a 100 yards short of the best point.
I brought the van down and fixed the camera… We were there an hour and
a half and got two good pictures, returning in triumph with our
trophy.” He doesn’t saying anything about moving cannonballs around. I
really don’t think he’s managing the image in that way, much as I find
Ms. Sontag interesting about photography, I don’t think she’s right
ERROL MORRIS: In the book there’s a citation to a monogram by Ulrich Keller. Which I dutifully bought and read.
GORDON BALDWIN: I don’t think he likes Fenton very much. He
certainly thinks he’s a creature of the Establishment. But how could he
not be, in a sense?
ERROL MORRIS: Keller’s argument interested me, and it’s essentially
picked up by Sontag, that Fenton was a coward. Or if not a coward that
he was a person who was very, very reluctant to expose himself to any real
danger. That the cannonballs were rearranged by Fenton – this would be
Keller’s argument – to make it look as though he was in greater danger
than he was, that this place where he had taken the photograph was
something of a tourist attraction – the visitors or who you wanted to
show a piece of the Crimean War, and it would be the place to do it. I
hope I’m characterizing it correctly. I believe I am.
GORDON BALDWIN: It was a place that wasn’t very safe to be. It
wouldn’t have acquired that name had it not been. The fact that the
Times sketch artist – the Illustrated News sketch artist – made a
picture at exactly, or very close to, the same point that Fenton’s
photograph was made indicates it certainly had a certain renown, and I
don’t suppose every nook or fold of the landscape had a name given to
it by soldiers. But I wouldn’t have said that Fenton was at all
cowardly. I think he was quite an adventurous character. He simply
documented what was available to him during the time he was there. He
happened to be in the Crimea at a point when there wasn’t much fighting
going on. The great assault on Sebastopol occurs after he’s left. Have
you read the letters?
ERROL MORRIS: I’ve read some of them, yeah. Not all of them, but a good number of them.
GORDON BALDWIN: I don’t know whether you’ve read them in the Gernsheim version or in the online version.
ERROL MORRIS: I’ve read both.
GORDON BALDWIN: Because Gernsheim edited the letters in a way that I
think was unfortunate. He takes out the endearments, which is too bad
because they give a flavor to his writings. Would you apply the same
argument to the sketch artist? That he went there to prove that he was
exposing himself to danger?
ERROL MORRIS: Presumably you have to take into account the conventions of the time.
GORDON BALDWIN: Victorian sensibilities. British sensibilities would
not have shown dead or dying people. The photographs of the dead don’t
occur until a little later, and it’s always of the enemy. At least
initially it’s of the enemy – the photographs that are made a couple of
years later of the revolt in India – of dead, enemy. Similarly, when
Alexander Gardiner is photographing corpses on the field at Gettysburg,
they’re the enemy. One doesn’t photograph one’s own dead. Because there
was so little fighting where Fenton was, there were no Russian corpses
he could photograph. He wasn’t close enough to fighting to be able to
photograph Russian corpses if there had been some. His van was an easy
target; it was big, but he needed it there because of the photographic
processes he employed. It would have been a violation of Victorian
sensibilities to have photographed the dead.
It’s Gardiner later who does photograph corpses. It’s Gardiner
photographing Confederate dead. Fenton certainly sees wounded British
coming back to camp and things like that – and sees British corpses
being carried away, but I don’t think one photographs that. It would
have been alien to his own sensibilities, and his own sensibilities
were not so very different from general sensibilities at that point.
The Crimean War was extremely unpopular, and it was very badly run, not
so badly run by generals, but the supply corps was hopelessly
antiquated. The soldiers, in that first winter, before Fenton arrived,
had inadequate food, inadequate shelter, inadequate clothing. The
images that are propagandistic are the ones that show that the soldiers
are adequately housed, adequately clothed. To that extent Fenton is a
propagandist, but I don’t think it goes much farther than that, and
indeed by the time he’d gotten to the Crimea, things had considerably
ERROL MORRIS: I read that the photograph of Sparling and the van was
taken the same day Fenton took the “Valley of the Shadow of Death”
picture and that Fenton had taken Sparling’s photograph at Sparling’s
request because Sparling thought that this would be his last day on
GORDON BALDWIN: Yes, I think that’s how the story runs, but I’m not
sure where it comes from. I don’t have any reason to think that it may
not be true, but Sparling is a fairly funny character. He isn’t simply
Fenton’s assistant although he functions that way for a long time and
advertised himself as being assistant to Mr. Fenton. He was a very
smart guy. He wrote a manual on photography that is extraordinarily
clear and beautifully phrased, but he didn’t have Fenton’s class
advantages. Sparling asked that that photograph be made because he knew
they were going back to this place which was dangerous, which Fenton
had been to before – although it doesn’t say that Sparling was with him
the first time and since he didn’t have a camera with him when he went
out to reconnoiter three weeks before, it’s possible Sparling wasn’t
there. If Sparling thought it was that dangerous, isn’t that testimony
to the contrary of Keller’s contention that Fenton was cowardly?
ERROL MORRIS: Yes, it is. Although it could just be that Sparling was also cowardly.
GORDON BALDWIN: Perhaps [laughter]. How far can one extrapolate
that? Who else was cowardly? My general view is that Fenton is a more
admirable kind of character than Keller thinks. He and I have had some
conversation – quite a number of years ago – about Fenton. I simply
disagree with everything he had to say of the subject. I just didn’t
think the way he was analyzing his character was useful and I thought
that the evidence we have runs to the contrary. The letters of course –
Fenton could not have foreseen that they would be published. And they
were published way after his death. The family realized that they were
important enough to copy them. The letters that have been published are
the result of somebody in the family copying the letters into a book.
The letters themselves don’t exist. There were two books which
different parts of the family. One of them is at Austin and the other
one’s at Bradford. They vary slightly. They’re not exactly the same
content, but they preserved the letters and clearly the family felt
they were important enough to want to preserve them. He is not writing
for the public, and of course he doesn’t want to make himself seem
unattractive or cowardly to his family or his publisher, since the
letters are variously written to his wife, to his brother and to his
publisher. He’s just trying to tell about what happened. It’s too bad
there aren’t letters from other periods of his life, but there aren’t
except for his official correspondence for the Photographic Society.
Clearly, the letters give a picture of a different kind of man than
* * *
This view contra Keller and Sontag – namely that the order is ON
then OFF – is also held by Malcolm Daniel, the curator of photography
of the Metropolitan Museum of Art and the author of an article in the
recent exhibition catalog, “All the Mighty World: The Photographs of
Roger Fenton.” Daniel told me that he, too, believes in the recycling
MALCOLM DANIEL: The long and short of it — or the short of it — is:
we don’t know which of the two pictures came first. For a long time it
was thought that the first one would be without as many cannonballs on
the road (OFF) and that Fenton pulled them out of the ditches and
littered the road with them (ON) to make the picture more dramatic. We
now think that the opposite is true. There are references in Fenton’s
own letters – a reference to British soldiers collecting the
cannonballs to fire them back in the other direction. We just can’t
know. People have sort of assumed that he put more there (ON) to make
the photograph more dramatic, but it’s just speculation. The danger was
real, also – as you can tell from the fact that there are cannonballs
there at all. It is an area that was certainly within range, and he had
this big van that he was carrying along with him, and you remember that
Marcus Sparling, his assistant, made him take the picture of Sparling
sitting on the photographic van before they went into the Valley of the
Shadow of Death because he was worried that they might not come out.
So, I don’t know. There’s no inscription, no documentation to say which
one is first, and so we can speculate that he’s making a more dramatic
picture or one can say: well, we have this reference to soldiers
collecting the cannonballs to fire back in the opposite direction, and
so it’s probably more likely they were removed than that he went out
there and lugged them around. I mean those things are heavy. It’s just
highly unlikely that he would go traipse around and scatter them over
* * *
Two sets of esteemed curators. Two sets of diametrically opposite
conclusions. There is the expectation if you have an odd number of
voters that there is little chance for a tie. So I looked for a
tiebreaker – a fifth arbiter, Richard Pare. Pare, the author of a
monograph on Fenton, has written eloquently on why these photographs
One of the undisputed masterpieces of photography is the Valley of
the Shadow of Death, so potent was it already as a symbol of the war
that the location is indicated on the printed key. Here he increases
still further the divorcement of the subject from any specific
identification with place. He had wanted to make an altogether
different picture facing towards Sebastopol and full of specific and
identifiable markers. Instead he was compelled by immediate danger to
retreat a little way back up the track and in so doing was presented
with the picture that he chose to record. It is devoid of any
topographical detail that defines a particular place; it becomes
instead an image about the horror of all war and the mundane business
of destruction. It suggests only the potential for sudden and
indiscriminate death. Fenton made two versions of the image and by
imposing the one on the other it is possible to see that the second and
published version is in all likelihood an arranged image. It makes the
message of the image more emphatic and is a photographic solution that
was unique. It has no precedent and no successors; it is a stark
description of a dreadful subject. The first iconic photograph of war.
From the above text it would seem clear that Pare believes that OFF
comes before he ON. Yet he describes himself as a flip-flopper on this
very question. Some days he looks at the photographs and thinks it’s
OFF followed by ON, on others, ON followed by OFF. Far from breaking
the tie between the OFF’s-then-ON’s (Keller and Haworth-Booth) and the
ON’s-then-OFFS’s (Daniel and Baldwin), he further underlines the
problem of using “logic” or “psychology” to adjudicate the issue.
RICHARD PARE: I go back and forth. Probably Fenton went out there or
Sparling, his assistant, went out there and arranged the cannonballs,
but then I look at it again and there just doesn’t seem to be a logic
for that conclusion. If you compare by flipping back and forth between
the two frames on the computer, you can see where the cannonballs go
missing from, and it doesn’t necessarily seem to follow what you would
do if you were going to embark upon an enterprise of that kind. So
there’s another possibility. There was a salvaging party, down there at
the same time, gathering them up, but he doesn’t say in the letters
that he wrote to his wife that there was anything like that going on.
In other accounts of the war there are the most explicit descriptions
of the ground being literally littered with cannonballs to the point
where the horses had trouble picking their way between them. So it’s
not in any way an extreme situation that he’s laying out, even if he is
arranging them. The question is whether you think that that’s like the
Arthur Rothstein thing of moving a cow skull in the desert and courting
abuse during the WPA.  I tend to think that just as an image, it’s
so powerful and such an extraordinary expression of that silent horror
of the war – whatever he does to it. Both versions are powerful. With
the additional cannonballs scattered about on the ground, it becomes a
little more compelling. Does that make any sense?
ERROL MORRIS: Absolutely. The oddity, of course, is that there’re two photographs.
RICHARD PARE: Right. You know, of course, that they are not the
pictures he was intending to make, right? Can you hang on just a
second? I’ve got the guy who’s been in trying to fix my printer. It’s
just about ready to go. I’ll be right back.
ERROL MORRIS: Okay. Absolutely.
RICHARD PARE: Right. Where was I?
ERROL MORRIS: We were talking about the pair of photographs.
RICHARD PARE: Yeah. It’s not even the picture that he intended to
make originally. He’d been out scouting, some days before, and had
intended to make a picture further down the valley or the gully – it’s
not so much a valley – towards Sebastopol and was driven back because
there was too much fire coming in. Probably the pictures he was
intending to make would have been far more site-specific. There would
have been identifiable topographical features that people would
* * *
As Gordon Baldwin points out, Fenton had gone to the Valley of the
Shadow of Death at least once before. Fenton mentions this in a letter
dated April 4-5, 1855:
…we walked along a kind of common for half a mile coming towards the
end upon Russian cannon balls scattered about. Further on the balls lay
thicker, but in coming to a ravine called the valley of death the sight
passed all imagination [ — ] round shot & shell lay in a stream at
the bottom of the hollow all the way down you could not walk without
treading upon them [ — ] following the curve of the ravine towards the
town we came to a cavern in which some soldiers were stationed as a
picket. They had made a garden in front forming the borders of the beds
with cannon balls. We had gone a little further down & were
admiring the rugged outline of the rock & pondering out where the
face had been smashed by the Russians fire when we were startled by a
great crack in the rock in front of us & a cloud of dust followed
by a second knock upon the opposite face of the ravine as the ball
bounded across it & then a heap of stones & the ball rolled
away together down the ravine…
But what does this tell us?
“…[T]he sight passed all imagination…you could not walk without
treading on them.” There were cannonballs everywhere. Could it be –
having seen the road on April 4 when the Russian cannonballs were
“scattered about” – that Fenton sought to recreate on April
23 what he had seen earlier? Is ON merely a re-enactment of a
previously seen event? Did he arrive at the Valley of the Shadow of
Death on April 23 only to be disappointed to see fewer cannonballs on
the road than he had seen earlier, then scatter the balls to evoke what
he seen earlier?
Again, these questions are not answered by Fenton’s letters.
The recycling issue is also of interest, but it cannot resolve the
question of which came first – ON or OFF. British soldiers could have
collected the balls on the hillsides and left them to be picked up on
the road. Fenton takes the first picture (OFF) before the British
soldiers pick up the balls, and then takes the second picture after the
balls have been piled on the road (ON). In this scenario, OFF comes
first, then ON. Or Fenton could have come on the balls collected on the
road, taken the first picture (ON), watched as British soldiers piled
them on horse-drawn carts, waited for the carts to leave, and then
taken the second picture (OFF). In this scenario, ON comes first, then
OFF. Note: in both scenarios Fenton has not intervened nor posed
anything. The British army could have put the balls on the road and
then taken them off to secure passage through the Valley of the Shadow
of Death. In this instance, by Sontag’s criteria, neither image would be posed.
The possibility of recycling does not help. It can support either
conclusion – ON before OFF or OFF before ON. To make matters worse,
recycling doesn’t have to be involved in any way – just because
cannonballs were often recycled doesn’t mean that they were recycled between
the taking of the two photographs. There could have been no recycling
on April 23, the day Fenton took the pictures. Recycling may be a good
thing – even when it involves cannonballs – but it can’t help us
determine the order of the photographs.
So why are these respected curators proposing such a theory? Here is
a simple reason. They are defending Fenton’s character from the
depredations of his antagonists. Is Fenton a coward? Did Fenton fake
his iconic photograph of the Crimean War? Did Fenton oversee the
scattering of the cannonballs? I imagine their defense of Fenton in
front of some imaginary jury. No. It’s not in accord with Fenton’s
character. It was done by others, by the British Army. Fenton is not a coward. He was in the line of fire. Here they are offering a new psychological theory to counter the psychological theory advanced by Keller.  But what does Fenton’s character – or his “psychology” – have to do with it?
Much of the problem comes from our collective need to endow
photographs with intentions – even though there are no people in the
frame, including Fenton himself, who is conspicuously absent. The
minute we start to conjecture about Fenton’s reasons, his intent – his
psychological state – we are walking on unhallowed ground. Can we read
Fenton’s intentions off of a photographic plate? Is there anything in
the letters that tells us what he was really thinking and what really
This is when I decided to try to determine the order of the pictures
completely independent of suppositions about Fenton or his
psychological state – his intentions, his beliefs. I wanted to leave
Fenton out of it. Was there a way to order the photographs based on
what we see in the photographs – nothing more?
The first question was which direction was Fenton facing — north,
south, east or west? Was he looking in the direction from where the
cannonballs were coming or in the opposite direction? The photograph
looks as though the camera is pointed up into the hills rather than
down into the valley. South rather than north.
Keller makes this point in “The Ultimate Spectacle”:
Fenton made two decisions reflecting his reluctance to expose
himself to risks. First of all, of the two similarly shaped valleys, he
chose the less dangerous one in the back of Chapman’s Batteries.
Secondly, he stopped in the upper, shallow part of the ravine, not in
the deeper, more advanced part shown in the “best general views.” Here,
he decided to turn the camera back up towards the camps, rather than
downward in the direction of Sebastopol, as Simpson and Robertson had
Fenton “decided to turn the camera back up towards the camps,” that
is, the pictures were take looking south. Pare came to the same
conclusion. He is also convinced that Fenton “turned around and,
literally facing in the opposite direction, looking uphill back towards
the Allies encampment…was confronted by the picture…” But where is the
Keller has never gone to the Crimea. Pare has gone but was unable to
find the Valley of the Shadow of Death. To be sure, there are problems
Both Keller and Pare believe that Fenton was facing south – back
toward the British encampments. Could they be mistaken? How did they
determine this? Neither of them had stood where Fenton stood, looked
through a camera lens and tried to match the contemporary landscape
with the images that Fenton had taken 150 years before.
It was at this point that I resolved to go to the Crimea and to find the Valley of the Shadow of Death.
I would like to propose a contest to the Times’ readership — an
invitation to order the photographs and to propose reasons why they must be
in that order. Anything is fair game. Any kind of evidence may be
considered, and I will discuss the solutions in a followup article.
 Sontag’s unwillingness to include photographs in her book
becomes a troublesome conceit. The presence of photographs in her
manuscript would force us to ask questions about the photographs
themselves. Without photographs Sontag’s theoretical concerns
predominate, and we end up thinking about her remarks in a photographic
 Arthur Rothstein was accused of fakery for moving a cow skull
ten feet. I plan to discuss this controversy – and the issue of posing
in general – in a subsequent essay.
 I might add that my interpretation of Baldwin’s and Daniel’s motivations is also a psychological theory.