Taffy Brodesser-Akner: How does this inevitably… Were there alternate endings?
Jesse Armstrong: Well, there were alternate endings considered, not in a really considered like, “Oh, shit, which way should we go?” Way. No, there were things tossed around and mornings where you might say, “Is this right? Should we consider? Could Kendall be the one who come through?” But never, not in a serious way. I mean, I keep on very aware that you are interviewing me, but I admire your work, and I keep on thinking about Fleischman and the ending of that, especially the pre-ending where you have… We’re doing spoilers all over this podcast. But there’s a big and very bracing and important perspective shift, right, before the end of your show and book. And yeah, I guess that’s like an exciting egg you know that you have to hatch, right? When you’re writing that show, you always knew that was going to come right before the end.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: I knew it had to. You’re talking about the second to last episode?
Jesse Armstrong: Yeah. Yeah.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: No. When I wrote the book-
Jesse Armstrong: Oh my God, this is huge. Now we’ve got some breaking news on the podcast.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Yes, you do have breaking news. Very few people know this. But in the first draft of the book, I handed in the book, it was a third-person book. I handed it to my editor. He said, “I love it.” And I said, “Do you like the way It turns out you were reading a book that one of the characters wrote?” And he said, “Oh, I didn’t really get that.”
Jesse Armstrong: That’s a brave person, by the way. I think that’s-
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: He’s the greatest.
Jesse Armstrong: That’s a brave person. Because that’s the sort of note that you’re reading somebody who you really admire’s work and you’re like, “Oh, I’m feeling embarrassed to say this.”
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: No.
Jesse Armstrong: I don’t understand what the hell is going on.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: I come from magazines. I worked at women’s magazines. There’s actually nothing you could say.
Jesse Armstrong: That would surprise you.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: That would surprise me. Or there’s nothing, literally, you can’t think of anything cruel enough to even jolt me here.
Jesse Armstrong: Good. But that was a realization that, whoa, what I thought I was doing isn’t obvious to the audience.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: I thought it was so obvious that I was worried about it. And then the other thing is in the book, you never found out where she was.
Jesse Armstrong: Okay. Did you think that was obvious too?
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: And I thought it was so obvious that she went off and had a nervous breakdown and everyone said, “She just seems so evil.” And this proxy character I had who was asking these questions like, “What if she isn’t so bad? What if I’m seeing more of myself in her as time goes on?” People didn’t get it. I mean, I’m not called a subtle writer very often, but I guess nobody got it. So the things I changed where I changed it to a first-person book, and then I changed it to the scene where she is. But I’ll tell you something really interesting about… And by the way, it was so important, the casting of it, everything about it once we got to a show was so important, because that was the ball you had to hide, that you were going to be hearing from her. And we got there. There were supposed to be nine episodes of Fleischman. This was always the seventh episode, and we had two episodes following it. And we did this table read. I don’t know, were your table reads at all during the pandemic?
Jesse Armstrong: We had to do a couple on Zoom. I hated it.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: They were so undignified. It was during lunch.
Jesse Armstrong: Yeah, especially if there’s anything comedic.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: It was terrible.
Jesse Armstrong: The Zoom experience is not good.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: We were all on the same terrible wifi. We were in offices, it was during a lunch hour. And we had this episode that we table read during this terrible wifi lunch period. And everyone was so shaken by it.
Jesse Armstrong: This was seven?
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: It was seven. And Claire Danes was just reading for the first time off the script. And everyone was so shaken off from it that we removed one of the episodes at the end right within hours after it, because we knew that after that we couldn’t sustain for much longer, that this was… I thought the emotional peak was going to be Lizzie and Jesse on the floor, but it turns out it was just going to be this extended emotional peak and he had to get out.
Jesse Armstrong: Yeah. Yeah.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: So I had that. But the thing I was most excited about at the end of the show and the book was that you had this scene between Rachel and Toby that you didn’t know if it really happened, right? Was this Libby just finishing the thing? That was always there, and that was the first thing I wrote.
Jesse Armstrong: Oh, wow. Wow.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: So in terms of ending, I guess I always think in terms of endings, because I also think that you can’t be efficient unless you know what you’re writing toward. But I guess I’m wrong.
Jesse Armstrong: Well, some writers certainly like that journey of discovery, don’t they? I think you need, or I need something on the board. And that’s what we would always do in our writers room. The work of when we assembled the sort of primary… I think the primary job in my mind, although I would never state it, because it would be a bit chilling of the kind of vibe, would be, what’s the end? Yeah, what’s the end of the season? Where are we getting to? Because once you have that I’m, yeah, I was going to say pretty confident that we can fill in the blanks.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: So did you know it was four… So at the end, by two, you knew it was four seasons?
Jesse Armstrong: No, no. I don’t know when. Maybe in the third. Certainly before the fourth season. I hope this is interesting, all this season.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: This is all writers want to know about. I have listened to every podcast you’ve been on, and I think it’s in the 700s, am I right? And it is like all I want to know is about the structure and about… And I hope I’m speaking for our fellow Guild members.
Jesse Armstrong: Let’s see. Yeah. Well, it was the beginning of… Before we’d started the room in earnest of the fourth season, I think whoever was around in London, Lucy, Tony, John maybe, and Will, Tracy might’ve been there to, I think this is it. And it was a sort of heavy, depressing thought to this endeavor. I think this is maybe how it ends. And so I wanted to, in a way, before I did even more on my own thinking, I wanted to sort of do a gut check with them, whether they were like, “Oh, you’re tired of going to New York and this is crazy, and you’re blowing up something which… You’re doing something for the wrong reasons.”
But they didn’t. Some of them, there were some cheerleaders for more seasons, but even the cheerleaders for more seasons were like, “Oh, no, I think there’s one more before the end.” And the majority, and especially I think Lucy was like, “Yeah, this is…” When I said, this is the shape of it where we could have an election and we would end and Logan would die, she used a phrase about it being a muscular version of it. And I think that was what really appealed to me, the like, yeah, let’s fucking go out with a bang and let’s do all our best stuff and see if we can have a really thrilling final season, which I hope it is.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: It is.
Jesse Armstrong: Well, I teed you up. You had to say that. You had to say that then.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: No, no, no, no. I’m telling you.
Jesse Armstrong: They way my intonation suggest. You couldn’t say, “Yeah, well…”
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Actually, actually.
Jesse Armstrong: Anyway, thank you.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: The skeptic’s version of this. No, what’s so interesting is how much the last season has to give that you go from, I remember watching it the first time and screaming, screaming actually after I realized in the episode after he dies, that she’s pregnant, right?
Jesse Armstrong: Yeah.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: You did that in the first five minutes after that episode. “Motherfucker.” Is what I screamed. And I meant it with love for you and everyone. But the idea, I think sometimes it’s so easy to be stingy with story, because that’s such a big thing for Shiv to be pregnant was such a big deal. And I know that she was pregnant in real, that Sarah was pregnant and that there was something to deal. But wait, would you have done that if not?
Jesse Armstrong: No, we wouldn’t. It is one of those hopefully happy creative… We talked about her being pregnant in the room, and it was weird one where when Sarah… This gets kind of personal, but I don’t think Sarah would mind us talking about this interrelationship. When she wasn’t pregnant, it felt like a kind of slightly, it had a melodramatic whiff to it. I find accents difficult, I find wigs difficult in TV shows, and I find those fake bumps, even the best-
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: They’re the worst.
Jesse Armstrong: Even the best are… And women look lots of different ways pregnant, right?
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: But never like that.
Jesse Armstrong: But never quite like in TV shows. So there was a bit of me that was like, “I really don’t want her to have to…” That was a tiny bit of the thinking. And then somehow, once I knew that she was, and we were talking about how to accommodate it, which would’ve been, we could have just about done. But once it was real, it started feeling so much more real. And so it became a very organic part of the drama of the show. And it ends up being quite crucial to the ending, which hopefully is another example of how, if you’ve got the tone right and the character dynamics right, that things start to feel organic, which are made up, which are inorganic in a certain way.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Or the thing that writers say, which is that the characters are telling you what to do, which is just you building good characters.
Jesse Armstrong: Yeah. Yeah.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Interesting. Yeah, that baby, you got your money’s worth from that. I hope you paid that baby. I hope that baby got a-
Jesse Armstrong: That baby drives such a hard bargain. I wish I’d never met that baby.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: I heard about that baby’s agent. That’s amazing. Another about thing that you’ll probably think nobody wants to hear, but actually everybody wants to hear. The room was structured as you all met together.
Jesse Armstrong: Yep.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: You were all in London and you all met together.
Jesse Armstrong: Yeah.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: How many of you were there?
Jesse Armstrong: I mean, on the first season when it wasn’t of such a hot ticket, sometimes only two people would show up. So the British, and this is maybe just a little bit useful for this podcast, the British writing world, we have our guild, it’s not as strong for lots of historical reasons, and the industry isn’t as large and well funded, so it has to be different, which is a long way round of saying the portfolio careers that all writers are used to everywhere is even stronger in the UK. And there just aren’t many staff jobs on shows.
So if I wanted a bunch of about half-and-half American and British writers. But for a lot of the British writers, they had other commitments. I couldn’t buy them out or they weren’t available or they had to do stuff. So some days they just couldn’t come in and probably other days they just didn’t want to. So sometimes the room would be much smaller and thinner. And also I was prepared. I had to do a little bit of luring people in. And some people I never quite managed to get, like Lucy Birch, who’s a brilliant… Some people I can never quite get in, Alice Birch, who’s a brilliant British playwright. I always was trying to tempt into the room and say, “You could just come in for a couple of days, Alice.” And she would show up, but I never fully integrated her into the room, likewise, Lucy [inaudible 00:29:23].
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Is she home drunk right now regretting every…
Jesse Armstrong: No, she’s doing lots of great shows and stuff. Anyway, so on the first season though, it was a little bit more ad hoc. It always kept that. And if John Brown or Will Tracy or Lucy Prebble were doing a show and they couldn’t be there the whole time, I would say, “Look, I’ll take as much as I can get off you.” So in the first season it would be between six and eight of us. And by the final season it was more like between 10 and 12 of us.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Wow. And what were the hours?
Jesse Armstrong: We tried a few different things, but we would do normally about a short day, 10:00 until 2:30 or 3:00.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Wow.
Jesse Armstrong: Partly to accommodate other people, people being able to keep at their projects cooking, partly so that I could go away and review the previous day’s notes and sort of fix. And I would often what I kept an ongoing document of I’d fill it the previous day’s notes like this stuff I think we keep, this goes into a document of a running commentary on what I thought we were doing. You get on a hot streak in the room if you know, that can come late and if it came late in the day, we would maybe stay a bit longer. But I think every day, knowing that you’re going to be in a room from say, 9:00 until 6:00 I think is too long to sustain the kind of enthusiasm and focus that I like when it’s really working.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Why do you think people do it for so long? I agree with you. We had the same system in my mini room and it seems so demoralizing.
Jesse Armstrong: What, to be in for so-
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: To make it into the way at the times we work from 9:00 to 5:00, right? It’s so demoralizing.
Jesse Armstrong: I think it is a bit demoralizing. It’s a bit too long, right?
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: It also feels like you’re juicing people in a way. It feels cheap.
Jesse Armstrong: I totally agree. And I’ve talked about this elsewhere or other people have talked about it. It was never like a tactic or a fake thing. But we’d always begin with just a chat of what everyone had been up to the night before. And I’m also nosy and a lot of Americans in the room, they were telling me about restaurants I didn’t know about.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: But they were in London.
Jesse Armstrong: They were in London. I like it if you can make it feel like it sneaks up on you, that it isn’t a job, that it’s delicious. And that feeling that all writers get sometimes of sneaking stuff under the wire or over the wire or behind people’s back, I think that’s a really good feeling for a room and for a writer, right, that they think they’re getting X, but I’m fucking giving them Y, they’ve got no clue. They’re idiots. Which it’s a delicious feeling. And I think that feeling in the room of it of not being a bunch of 1950s IBM people, but being somewhere closer to a garrote in Paris in 1920 is a good feeling. If you can be on the HBO money in the garrote, that’s the dream combination.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Oh my gosh. What those guys would’ve done with that.
Jesse Armstrong: Yeah, we should have drunk a lot more cocktails.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: With that HBO money. Yeah.
Jesse Armstrong: Sorry.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: That’s so funny. You had an assistant in the room taking notes?
Jesse Armstrong: Yes.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Okay. And where was the room?
Jesse Armstrong: Moved around. The most unglamorous version was in Brixton where I’ve got an office, in South London. And then there was sometimes we were more in more service kind of quite depressing offices. But I quite like the depressing service, you’ve got some people doing a marketing presentation next door feeling. Because again, it encourages that kind of something slightly naughty that hope they don’t know what we’re doing in here feeling.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Right. Like, “Those suckers.” How did you assign episodes for credit? I think that’s a big question people have.
Jesse Armstrong: Yeah.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Me, meaning the people.
Jesse Armstrong: So yeah, this is a really fascinating area to us, right? And anyone who’s been in a room, they’re quite… The question of how much credit the showrunner takes versus the people you’re in the room with can be a sort of hot topic, a fraught topic, a difficult one, because the showrunner often gets a lot of attention. And so making sure that everyone else gets appropriately recognized financially and in the culture and the discussion of the show is important. And I guess it’s the credits are somewhat a reflection of whose written what, but they’re also a reflection of who deserves to be recognized for their input into the show. And finding that balance can be a little bit complicated.
On the very simplest level, I would try and make sure that people knew at the beginning of the room if they were going to be assigned to an episode that would have their name on it, sometimes co-written as it was in the last season when I had a strong feeling that I wanted to write a number of the episodes. And in earlier seasons, they were more single credits. So I would try to let people know roughly whether they were likely to be writing an episode credited or in the larger group of producer-writers who might be associated with the show and have their input recognized but not have their sole name on an episode.
And then in terms of who was going to write those first drafts of the episodes, it was a good mixture of somebody’s going to be away, so they can’t do this episode, this person seems to have a particular affinity for this material. And also, we’d also assign extra research on top of the stuff we got from consultants. It might have been like in John Brown in the first season, “John, will you research sex parties?” And this weird world of… It became kind of smaller in the episode, that element of it but, “Will you do that? And Georgia, will you think about what Thanksgivings or parties or family do’s?” And so the area that you did some research on might become the episode which you were the lead writer on.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Right. Who came up with eating the bird with the…
Jesse Armstrong: Waterland. I don’t know. I think it was one of those things that got discussed in the room. I don’t want to give credit.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Is it real?
Jesse Armstrong: Oh, yeah.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Oh. God.
Jesse Armstrong: Yeah.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Oh, god.
Jesse Armstrong: And I think we discovered that while we were… Somebody said, we tried never to think about it, but I think the billions did the same thing in a season that might have been ahead of us. We certainly didn’t take it from them, but at a certain point during the production, we became aware that they were either doing the thing after us or before us.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: I mean, there are only so many proteins, right?
Jesse Armstrong: Exactly.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: I read the screenplay you wrote that is what Succession is either based on or was your first-
Jesse Armstrong: Was an important antecedent. Yes.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Yes, your important antecedent. And it’s interesting, it was the first time-
Jesse Armstrong: I’m fascinated. I’d love to hear what you’re going to say right now. What do you think about the relationship?
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: I think the relationship is interesting in terms of, I’m also a journalist and I remember people ask me because I’m a journalist if I want to do adaptations of nonfiction books all the time, and mostly the answer is no, because I get to write all this nonfiction. Also, because I know what it is like to have a relationship with somebody in the world who knows you’ve written about them, and it’s horrible for me, right?
Jesse Armstrong: Complicated. Yeah.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: I mean, I’ve written more than 100 I bet, profiles of actors. And why was I rewatching Succession when I was sick? Because there’s a lot I can’t watch anymore. Because the last thing a flu delirium needs is someone you’ve interviewed coming through the screen and yelling at you. I guess what I think about it is that Succession freed you. I loved that screenplay and I see all of the DNA of Succession in it. And it’s so funny the way you imagine these people talking, but it’s so audacious that you imagine these people talking. And I guess you have enough experience with it, right, from everything you’ve done in your career leading up to it. It feels like Succession set you free to do things that weren’t… I mean, it’s not really libel, right? If they’re under the-
Jesse Armstrong: Yeah, they don’t do anything particularly. Yeah, sure.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: In the screenplay. But I mean, I didn’t even know that his first name was Keith Murdoch. I didn’t know that if your name was Keith Rupert Murdoch, that you would choose Rupert, for example. I didn’t know that. But what was so interesting to me is to see some of the things I’ve always wondered about in Succession written, which are some of the vocal tics that I wondered. I wondered if they were-
Jesse Armstrong: If they’re there in the-
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Yeah.
Jesse Armstrong: They are.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: The way they say, “Uh-huh.” The way uh-huh is this loaded… And it’s even spelled in… I don’t know if that’s a Britishism or if that’s you just saying, “No, I spell U-H-H-U.” Without the last H that a copy editor here would affix to it. But yeah. Yeah, exactly. But those loaded, uh-huh. And the way the fuck-offs, the things that were little things we say that are now just Successionisms.
Jesse Armstrong: Sorry.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Exactly. No, no. You can’t stop yourself.
Jesse Armstrong: I can’t stop myself.
Taffy Brodesser-Akner: Let’s do it.
Jesse Armstrong: Yeah, I’m fascinated by that, because I haven’t gone back to it for a while, partly because yeah, it feels too much.